OT: Critics and Proofreaders needed...

[scirocco16vr32 at gmail.com (Chris Bennett)]

Just a quick note... 
     To all that have devoted time and energy by reading/editing, I
want to thank you and the feedback has been outstanding.  I have been
raked over the coals twice really good but that is what I wanted.  LOL

      I like the story alot but I know the writing is semi-atrocious. 
Bear with me I am trying to process all the input and with the help I
have recieved I may be able to salvage this.  LOL

Thanks again
Chris